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The rain fell down like tears from God,
'Cause yo rejected me girl,
And the wind blew like the earth was sighing,
'Cause you walked away girl.
Your pretty face was like heaven
And your soft touch like silk on my skin,
Your voice sweet like the birds during spring time,
And what you did too hard for me to Handle.
Why should I have tried,
Why should I have gotten my hopes up,
When I know I'm too pathetic for you,
And why did I feel this way,
As I knew there was nothing I could say.
'Cause yo rejected me girl,
And the wind blew like the earth was sighing,
'Cause you walked away girl.
Your pretty face was like heaven
And your soft touch like silk on my skin,
Your voice sweet like the birds during spring time,
And what you did too hard for me to Handle.
Why should I have tried,
Why should I have gotten my hopes up,
When I know I'm too pathetic for you,
And why did I feel this way,
As I knew there was nothing I could say.
![[CASTING CALL] Paramount's Sonic the Hedgehog #1](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/28e450f2-cbda-4cf2-8be9-34267e2cf955/ded99wa-24161a9d-18d6-48a7-8324-66b019f84688.png/v1/crop/w_184,h_184,x_0,y_302,scl_0.12976022566996/_casting_call__paramount_s_sonic_the_hedgehog__1_by_daveman1000_ded99wa-92s-2x.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTA3MjEiLCJwYXRoIjoiXC9mXC8yOGU0NTBmMi1jYmRhLTRjZjItOGJlOS0zNDI2N2UyY2Y5NTVcL2RlZDk5d2EtMjQxNjFhOWQtMThkNi00OGE3LTgzMjQtNjZiMDE5Zjg0Njg4LnBuZyIsIndpZHRoIjoiPD0xNDE4In1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.-4UJdxn27AA83HsuO4TatwRKntcih6FPtzpXYM7cPv4)
![[CASTING CALL] Paramount's Sonic the Hedgehog #1](https://images-wixmp-ed30a86b8c4ca887773594c2.wixmp.com/f/28e450f2-cbda-4cf2-8be9-34267e2cf955/ded99wa-24161a9d-18d6-48a7-8324-66b019f84688.png/v1/crop/w_92,h_92,x_0,y_151,scl_0.064880112834979/_casting_call__paramount_s_sonic_the_hedgehog__1_by_daveman1000_ded99wa-92s.png?token=eyJ0eXAiOiJKV1QiLCJhbGciOiJIUzI1NiJ9.eyJzdWIiOiJ1cm46YXBwOjdlMGQxODg5ODIyNjQzNzNhNWYwZDQxNWVhMGQyNmUwIiwiaXNzIjoidXJuOmFwcDo3ZTBkMTg4OTgyMjY0MzczYTVmMGQ0MTVlYTBkMjZlMCIsIm9iaiI6W1t7ImhlaWdodCI6Ijw9MTA3MjEiLCJwYXRoIjoiXC9mXC8yOGU0NTBmMi1jYmRhLTRjZjItOGJlOS0zNDI2N2UyY2Y5NTVcL2RlZDk5d2EtMjQxNjFhOWQtMThkNi00OGE3LTgzMjQtNjZiMDE5Zjg0Njg4LnBuZyIsIndpZHRoIjoiPD0xNDE4In1dXSwiYXVkIjpbInVybjpzZXJ2aWNlOmltYWdlLm9wZXJhdGlvbnMiXX0.-4UJdxn27AA83HsuO4TatwRKntcih6FPtzpXYM7cPv4)
A peom I wrote... read the poem, I'd say it'd explain itself.
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Anything written with real emotion can be sensed, and this poem really gives that off. Like you can really feel everything you felt while writing. I love the comparisons made in the second stanza, very beautiful.